Typophile

Self Promo Logo

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Logo for self promotion materials. It’s a challenge to design for myself. Critique and suggestions would be very helpful.

Initially, I want to recognize something in the pear, but I see a ’c’ and possibly an ’r’. Not knowing if that’s right or if I’m supposed to be seeing those letters, it’s a poor point of focus.

I also think the position title face is unnecessarily busy.

You have a lot of conflicting parts and it’s making my eye jump all over the place. Remember the KISS system from school: “Keep it simple, students”.

I too want to find some sort of hidden shape. Is there one?

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