I like the design! Two comments: The middle stroke of the M doesn't need to come down so far, and the lowercase a bugs me: it's not immediately obvious to me what letter that is. Perhaps flipping and rotating it to match up with the alternate form of a lowercase a.
Hello!
Up for critique today we have Cataglott Sans, a sporty sans-serif with a geometric basis. This started as a logotype for a piece of athletic apparel, but I just couldn't stop and suddenly had an entire alpahbet. So then I decided to make two. And I would like to make a few more before all is said and done.
It's construction is largely mathematical, with the usual optical tweaks and ink traps at all the acute joins. I left most of the right angles alone.
Two weights for now, regular and bold, though I would like to add a light and all three obliques. Nobody has seen this yet besides me, so I'd love some feedback.
Word up!
Darrin
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