here is the new logo i have made based more or less on your suggestions. i‘m curious about new critiques for this one :)
P.S. the motto is about to born...i guess :))

Marosi dude, for a graphic desing firm your new logo lacks the following:
* a clever design idea
* a cleverly-designed, contemporary typeface
* the current zeitgeist
* coolness
* subtlety
All of these qualities are essential to the logo of a graphic design firm to show potential customers the brilliant and appealing nature of what you are going to do for them. The red squiggle looks just like the meaningless scribble used in the logos of sign-making companies employing tradesmen as ersatz designers. If you must include a hand-scrawled element, abstract is okay but make it an artful abstract squiggle suggesting something specific.
The whole thing might work better if the type is colored and the abstract part in black.
j a m e s
No stress Chuck, I thrive on improper grammar and was being silly. I get so sick of having to write everything properly.
i like your type use above.
Thanks, the color is uneven in “morosi”, but I suppose it’s eye-catching overall.
i was just trying to see where m’s logo might go using the same building blocks.
I’m trying to persuade him to use a different font. But don’t mind me, keep going with those same building blocks. The font I used hasn’t even been released yet.
j a m e s
dear james,
the logo you have come up with is - no ‘fence - worse than mine. it has nothing that suggest a design firm. At all. rather a law firm. or whatever else but not a design firm. As you said a design firm logo needs the following:
<<* a clever design idea
* a cleverly-designed, contemporary typeface
* the current zeitgeist
* coolness
* subtlety
All of these qualities are essential to the logo of a graphic design firm to show potential customers the brilliant and appealing nature of what you are going to do for them.>>
i can‘t find any of these in that logo. the same goes to chuckgroth, too.
i‘m not saying that the suggestions are not good. the suggestions are great and thanks for them but don‘t make something that has nothing to do with your theories.
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