In my opinion the L needs to be slightly closer to the V and the second A needs to move away from the V. Once you’ve done that you might then need to open up NDO.

Rob

Move the first “A” a hair to the left.
Move the “V” slightly to the left.
Space out the “NDO” a hair.
Look again.

BTW, if this is for print, higher res please.

hhp

I’d err on the side of loose over tight with such a sad letter combination. IMHO

I will make adjustments. Thank you for lending your eyes and brains.