Not having much luck here are ya? Here’s a screenshot of what your “capturebcards.jpg” link brings up on my end:

As you can see, not much to look at.
I have to admit, with all this build-up I’m getting a bit curious...

I’m guessing the image is CMYK. It is also quite large for posting on the web.

I think the word “duckling” is w´quite nice, although it might have been more compact. The size contrast between dr and duckling is too small. Te ornament is too clip art, is it adobe wood type? there’s a cafe here in oslo, right around the corner that has exactly the same ornament. I think the photograph, the “me”/”my website” and the ornament are competing, not complementing each other. kill some darlings, and reenliven them for a project where they are useful.

good luck!:)

alex

Hey thank you Alex for your comments.
About the logotype : well, it’s been my visual identity for 4 years now and I wasn’t really considering changing it right now (I need my new business cards for a convention next week...) but you’re absolutdely right about the ornament, it is based on an Adobe Wood Type one and I know that’s it’s not so classy nore original anymore but I’m still very fond of it (I can get very emtional ;-))... I was wondering more about the layout of the bCard rather than the logotype itself. I am going to post the other color versions in an hour or so. I like better the first version too and I’m just wondering about the arobase...
Anyway, other critics are welcome.

PS : At the begining Dr Duckling was the name of a (successful) graphic project that I did (print, web, tees) about taking CARE of the environment (nature heath care...) and I just kept it when I started my freelance activity as it felt right to...