Typophile

constructive criticism wanted for trajan book title

G'day font people,

I'm nearing the end of designing a cover for an upcoming book and I'm using Trajan for the titling text. If you have time, I would appreciate some constructive criticism on what can be done to improve the look/readibility of it, I think it looks ok but something strikes me as being NQR, if anyone can help I would really appreciate I am a bit out of my depth at this macro tweaking level
cheers

Nick

Ok I give up how do I post an image up? I thought I had one attached, it was definately there in preview

Should be an insert image link below the Comment box.

yeah, I have clicked on the insert image link about 5 times, navigated to my picture file selected it and so on. I have an error next to the link which says 'could not copy image. Error.
grr

Is it CMYK? Try renaming it?

and I quote..

http://typophile.com
onHTTPError: 407

mm curious

BTW, not cmyk, it's an optimized GIF, thanks though

Hmm, maybe you can put it up on another webside and link to it?

Nicholas, I had a similar problem in a another thread you could try removing any wordspaces from the image title.
Tim

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