It would be nice to see a non-inline version first/too.

hhp

The general form of your glyphs is nice, but I don't think the inlines are working. The sliver of a stem created on the left side of the glyphs is distracting, especially at normal/ smaller sizes. The inlines make the glyphs feel unbalanced and feel more like slapped-on embellishment rather than a gesture that grows naturally out of the letterforms (exceptions include the |A| where the inline cuts into the counter, but even then the super thin sliver bothers me).

I personally think a non-inlined version would be nice. Either that or rethink the inlines.