Typophile

Pappy Creative Logo

pappycreative

Well, it's come a long way from the last idea I had. I'm looking for critique on anything. Background - I'm into illustrations with a cartoon feel. I want the logo to be playful but profressional. Any help is appreciated.
Pappy Creative Logo

sorry, I didn't realize I posted this twice

I see a sad, or maybe somewhat worried, face.

I see breasts.

I see Beaker from Sesame Street.

hhp

I see sad breasts..
No, sorry, but, I also think that the illustration looks kinda sad and worried..

I see indecision.

Adam, your type and your illustration are fighting for attention with neither winning. The logo needs a better sense of hierarchy.

I found both the image and type too generic and open to interpretation.. and therefore a bit weak. You're coming across as 'any guy' rather than as 'that individual'. Don't play safe, try for a stronger expression of that personality you seek.

i can see what everyone is saying about worried or sad face. i was just wondering if anybody caught on to "pc" in the eyes. i'll try to come up with something better. thanks for the feedback

Hey Adam...

First of - I like the colour green...and the illustration is funny, but if you want to say Illustrations - I would put in more illustration and less type. And speaking of type. To me, Futura is to ordinary and I'm really bored with it. I understand you want it to be more business like - just make the type black and let the illustration speak.

Or maybe you could make the type interact more with the illustration - make it part of the illustration maybe?

Just a few thoughts...

Hey and tjek this guy out:

http://www.madsberg.dk/

Good luck

mark, thanks for link. prett cool illustrations
i'll see what i can come up with

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