Typophile

Critiques, please

Fukupe

Hello,

This is an initial work, but I will really appreciate any critiques.

F.

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There are things about it that I like, but the "t" is trying too hard. If you keep it, the whole thing has to be more pushy; for example you might try a very short top arch for the "a".

hhp

The i-dot could do a bit lower. And, yes, |t| looks anemic.

thanks, I will work on "t"

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