Hello all!
This is my first time posting here, but it is also my first typeface so I find it fitting.
Any critique would be great.
My intentions on this piece were to keep it modern and neutral
but designed and stylized by logic and reason.
There are many common negative and positive shapes throughout that keep it all together.
But I know it's not perfect yet and I'm still willing to alter it if need be.
It was a style choice to have a low x-height. I know for legibility purposes it's usually a little higher (not at 50% like it is here) , and at small sizes, it feels handwritten.
Also, I've had trouble with the / V/. I want it to be consistent but if anyone agrees, I might go back and look at it again? What do you say?
I've also heard an illustrator friend say he wasn't feeling the /B/ ?
That being said...
Any agreements, glaring mistakes or particular changes that you feel should be made?
Thank you!
WIlling to hear from all!