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feather hair extension Business Card

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hello typophiles. this is a business card i've made for someone starting a feather hair extension service. please critique, any criticism will help. thank you.

oh yeah, the reason i used the turquoise color, is because she said its her favorite color. lol.

I don't think you need to put the title 'contact information', it should be obvious without it. Maybe there could be more leading on the contact info?


I liked the thin font for the main title in the first version a lot. Is that St Marie? The script font in your latest version is extremely generic, and the mustard color is a step backwards to, in my opinion.

Also, are you sure the girl's name is Shirlery, rather than Shirley?

The feather hair extension business card looks wonderful and attracts easily someone's attention. Any respectable business should create an unique business card and a logo. The cosmetology school from http://tristatecosmetology.com/schedules/ teaches anyone how to become a professional cosmetician and when one of these students will want to open a business in this field, he should resort to your services.

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