why doesn't anyone want to critique my type face.

why doesn't anyone want to critique my type face.

I'm no pro so take this advice for what it's worth.

The top of the /f/ seems awkward (perhaps move the stem rightward and extend the arm leftward (like in the /t/. The reversed /s/ for the /z/ also seems a little uncomfortable for me.

thanks this is gonna be a a school project and its my first typeface. Im just trying to get a direction of where to go. Thanks allot for your help. I just wanna make this the best it can be

thanks this is gonna be a a school project and its my first typeface. Im just trying to get a direction of where to go. Thanks allot for your help. I just wanna make this the best it can be

People are silent, because there's nothing much to say - you've taken an existing typeface and deformed it.
Plus, the typeface literally consists of one copypasted shape - no imagination.

thanks for your honesty

It's a bit too modular/linear and not styled enough for my liking. The letters need to be individual and unified somehow. Here they seem to be using repeated parts in unharmonious arrangements. For instance the counters of /a/ seem wide next to the /b/ because it's a different shape and needs compensation as the counter isn't as tall.