Typophile

Any and all feedback appreciated.

Scott Cohen

Logo is for a company providing workshops/tools for writers.

Thanks in advance.

Isn't it usually "well-being"?

Try posting an RGB image!

The concept of the first version is the better one:
write well is highlighted - that makes sense. I don't get the point of the inversed colored i dots.
The letter-spacing should be enlarged.

Luma Vine: yes, usually
Frode Frank: CMYK is now RGB. Apologies.
Intermalte: yes "write well" and "to being" are both independent messages as well.

thanks for your comments.

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