Typophile

logo for a nu-folk record label

pigeoninpjs

Dear all,

I am dead scared as it is the very first time I post my own work on here but here we go...
I am designing a logo for a small record label and thought here would be the best place to get expert opinions.
The labels releases mainly nu-folk bands. So I thought an organic vintage script would a good choice.
I would be so grateful if you could point me in the right direction for improvements.
I am no logo designer therefore any help would be greatly appreciated.

Kind regards

PJ

Incorporating the type in the safety pin seems forced, not only because the type doesn't look anything like bent metal -- even if it did, bending a safety pin even once is a pain in the ass. Nevertheless, it's a strong symbol with a distinct skeleton. I would look for type that reflected it's shape somehow. Everyone can't be an expert in all matters, so don't be afraid of utilizing the expertise of a type savvy designer.

Thanks loads,

I wasn't actually thinking about the realistic or tangible aspect of the pin. Thank you for bringing it up.
I'll bare it in consideration. maybe I should look for a font that looks more "wirey" but I'm worried it will then look a bit too childish.
I have experimented with text forming the "body" of the pin and have come up with a few variation or the below example.
Unfortunately I feel the safety pin head doesn't read as much anymore. It has also lost it's organic "folksy" feel. But I do like the half disk closing off the logo and giving the whole thing a sense of inclosed safety/security.
Guess that's me going back to the drawing board!

Thanks again,
PJ

here is the image:

The first one is perfect!
But I'm not sure about "records" -- is it necessarily part of the mark?
At any rate, it might be better in all caps, and I would experiment with where to put it in relation to the logo, in various layouts, especially the business card, which is the most difficult piece of corporate design.

I see a play on "records" in the left portion of the safety pin, it looks like half a disc/vinyl. Maybe some breathing room between the text and the shapes on either side and it looks great.

I'm not seeing the safety pin as well in the 2nd example - maybe because there's no thin pin/wire part anymore. I think they both have a lot of potential though. I would just keep experimenting with pencil and paper, drawing lots of variations. And I think Matt is referring to the right side of the pin, not the left.

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