Hey, those pangrams look familiar!

If you're going to do that swoopy treatment at the bottom right of /n/m/h/, I think you should let it dip below the baseline a touch more. Those terminals look like they're riding high.

I think you've identified well the letters that need the most work. I'm also not sure about /q/'s descender, and /t/ might be too wimpy above the crossbar.

I love extra bold didones included yours :)
thanks for your comment on my post.
I agree whit eliason +
·maybe the terminal lower-right of /u/ should has the same shape as /n/ ?
·a bit big left serif of /A/
· the lower /K/ leg seems outstanding to me
· right /Y/ arm isn't going too much left?

"W" makes me scratch my head. I just can't find a natural way to form it from "V".

something like this?

This is the opposite direction from the charset. Because then both V and X would have to be changed.
It's not the junction, but inner space balance I can't figure out. Notice the huge left serif I made to close that gap.
What I am trying to do is to find that "magical" condensed "V" to clone and form "W".