I like the first (close to the original drawings) better
but with the Y proportions and the angle you changed.
Little bit round serifs make it looks more consistent,
I think. Very nice. Where did you find that sketch ?
AS
Fra BARTOLOMEO (1472-1517)
Portrait of Girolamo Savonarola (c. 1498)
Oil on wood, 47 x 31 cm
Museo di San Marco, Florence
http://www.wga.hu/frames-e.html?/html/b/bartolom/fra/savonaro.html
dear typophiles,
i'm posting my latest project: fra, a display font based on the lettering on a sketch by italian renaissance artist fra bartolomeo.
i'm presenting two versions. i started with a design, that wasn't very close to the original drawings. after i got feedback, that it was to reserved and geometric i decided to draw a new version.
by now, i hate the first version, but i'm not quite sure if the second attempt is heading in the right direction, even though i like it much more. please tell me what you think.
is it too calligraphic ot should be even less "sharp"? what about the serifs, should i keep the edges or round them up?
regards,
titus
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