Excuse me, forget extension name.
et_1ra_prueba.pdf (15.2 k) |
Thanks for all,
Eduardo
et_1ra_prueba (15.2 k) |
Excuse me, forget extension name.
et_1ra_prueba.pdf (15.2 k) |
The overall squarness of the letters makes them very nice to read on the screen. I suspect that it will very very useful for low resolution printers as well.
I'm not sure that the bowls on the b d h look well with the other curved letters like e and c. For example the d and b look heavy next to the e and c. Also the k does not fit in well with the others. On the v - z line each letter has very different colour from each other.
Quite nice, Eduardo.
I would make the descenders slightly shorter.
The main glyph issue I see is the "k": it's a bit too mannered. On the other hand, the unusual lightness of the upper arm is a readability advantage.
Also, I would make the beak of the "r" much stronger and more in character, the "s" narrower, and give the "x" more character.
Spacing: nice and tight, just a bit uneven. The blank space should be smaller though.
hhp
Good work.
To me the counter of the "e" is too small, in other words the top of the "e" looks too heavy in comparision with the other letters. I agree with HHP about the "r" and the "s". I would add a bit of colour to the "x" making its secondary strokes thinner.
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