This is a draft of the front side of a congratulations card for a corporate client.
Inspired by and a tribute to some of Herb Lubalin's gorgeous script pieces.
I'd love any feedback/critique! Thanks.
Typophile
Feedback on hand lettered congratulations card?
I think you should move the thread to Critique > Typography / Composition
Anyway, I like it overall, but it lacks flowing in places (g, most notably).
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