That treatment says retro hippie organic more than whimsical art posters. The tilt of the /e/ and the kerning are what stands out (in a bad way) typographically to me.

can someone explain a bit what's bad about those things please?

Top line appears to be sloping downwards from left to the right. Other than that I think it is a close enough fit for what you are after, and it is a very nice typeface.

The errant e puts me in mind of nothing so much as a sign fallen into disrepair. I picture it on the wood siding of a storefront in an old outlet mall.

Thanks for the feedbag! I really do like the font and even the idea of it looking like an old hippie sign in disrepair, I'm pretty anti-corporate.