
Since this is my first font meant for text sizes, I'd appreciate any constructive criticism. The goal is to make a readable magazine-friendly typeface that appears very crisp and curvy— maybe even floral.
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That's a great start! I really like the g. I think the bowl of your /a/ could use some more didot'ness. Meaning the top part of the bowl going in a more horizontal direction, but perhaps that's just personal flavour. I think you should give the /y/ a round terminal. The way it is now really looks out of place to me. It would probably be better for legibility if you make the arm of the /r/ end more open, so that the terminal points in a more horizontal direction, instead of downwards. That way you could also make it more compressed which would make IMO a better texture. For comfortable reading at small pntsizes, it would probably help if you make all thin lines a little thicker. Keep going!
Sorta, it turned into a higher-contrast display face, seen in this thread: http://typophile.com/node/91783
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