I can certainly see the Titillium and Klavika influences. There's also a fair bit of Interstate in there as well, I think. Your challenge should be to differentiate it from Titillium, because at the moment, they are remarkably close. A few comments:

• T = straighten the left-hand crossbar
• e = the terminal is wider than the rest of the stroke
• q = where the bowl meets the stem, it looks too steep. Try raising the stem.
• J = very narrow!
• w (regular italic) = it looks unbalanced? Is it wider on the right than on the left?
• P = interesting terminal on the stem. Have you investigated giving the same terminals to all uppercase strokes with stems that terminate on the baseline?

Thanks CaleD for your comments!
Have you ever finished writing a paper, print it out, then notice like, 10 mistakes? Thats kinda what happened to me here. Right as I posted those, I noticed quite a few problems. I agree with everything that you stated and I am currently editing them now. As for the P terminal, I have thought about adding it to the other applicable characters, but really wanted some feedback on it first; so this helps out alot! Now, to the Titillium reference, I did hand draw all these on Fontlab, so its not like I copied them or anything, but your right. I should try to make some of the very similar characters more unique.
Once again, thanks for the suggestions!

the italic /Q/s all have dissonant tails to their regular counterparts. I like how the regular /Q/s do not let their tails into their counters, however the italics do. if that makes sense.

Ah yes, the italic Q. I have spent many hours over the Q and it still fails me. Do you think I should change the Italic Q so that the tails are all the same and not in the counter? Or do you think they are ok? I mean, There is still some cleaning up to do with the tails, but what do you think?

I think I have fixed the problems CaleD was talking about. Let me know if you all see any other issues. I'm sure they are out there. Hope you enjoy!

I have been doing more work on this typeface in the past couple of weeks so I posted up some more example sheets (v3). Currently I am adding more glyphs - working on old-style numerals, automatic and discretionary ligatures - hoping that this will make my family larger more complete and impressive. Even though it is still in progress, I would like more feedback please! I will be posting updates soon probably.
Thanks all for any potential help,

-jb