Just a lettering piece I’m working on. I’m not to familiar with brush scripts. Do you spot any obvious mistakes, or do you have some suggestions for improvements?
The 'i' seems pretty low / small compared to the rest — so much so that I thought it was a swash from the character to its right. Also, the sharp ends on the 't' aren't present in any of the other characters.
The whole thing looks like it's in perspective. I don't know if that's just the smallness of the i and the height of the t, but it looks like the word is angled towards me.