Check if 6 and 9 are falling down on one side.
Number 5 in old style doesn't look good, looks pretty deformed.

P.S. - You could show some better quality image, with nicer edges. Looks like it's made in PS.

Thanks, tourdeforce.The oldstyle figures are very much an afterthought. I should have excluded them from the sample until I am happier with them.

I've edited the original post with a link to a pdf.

Derek

Great design!

P and smallcap P have a heavy spot at the bottom of the bowl, where it's more curved on the outside and more straight on the inside. Pick one.

4 is light. S is a little light on top. Lowercase s is light all over and needs a lot of curve work.

There is just a bit of a lump on the outer lower left of the bowl of g and q. There is also something wobbly about the parentheses that I can't quite put my finger on.

By whatever accident, the right square bracket is heavier than the left one. Obvious when you look at it, but I know how easy it is to never look at your brackets again.

Since you intend this for body use, your asterisk should default to a superscript form. But hold onto the big one as an alternate; some people will want it for something.

@cerulean: Thanks for the feedback! I see what you're talking about in each case. I'll get to those corrections. The large asterisk results from the years I've spent looking at fonts in Visual Studio -- I like a large asterisk. But I think your suggestion about making the superscript version the norm makes good sense. If I ever do a monospaced version for use in text editors, I'll make the full-height one the norm then.

Derek

I've made the suggested changes (except making the 4 heavier, which I totally overlooked). I've got it roughly kerned the way I like, but there's more work to do on that. I'm about to dive into hinting.

Again, feedback is greatly appreciated.

The latest: melodio sample 3

Thanks!
Derek

P.S. - I think allowing auto-hyphenation on German with English as my default language has caught me on "Grundbegriffen". Oops!

This is the first time I've created Eth, eth, Thorn, and thorn for a font. I followed the advice of Sig­urður Ármanns­son here. Here's how that turned out, showing the glyphs they're based on: