Whoa...that's impressive! I'm not sure what kind of feedback you are looking for, but while I can't read the first image, there definitely appears to be some sort of letterforms there.

"we are water"?

It is legible to a very, very small degree.

I think it needs some supporting copy to go with it.

I would make it even more flowing, if possible. Even if it makes it less legible.

Crazy. I like it.

Cool work! but in my opinion you need to make the letters more legible, just a bit!