Typophile

Web Banner

Etah Chen

Hi. This is a web banner advertising two films. What do you guys think? Any changes you feel should be made? Thanks for your time.

I would try to separate more the two films (it's not clear the relationship between text and images).

I feel that you should create a more distinctive header for the event date itself and I agree with riccardo to create more seperation between the 2 films. I instinctively thought it was one film.

Leave the herd

thanks guys. monophant, what do you mean 'leave the herd'?

i turned it into two different banners now. i know its completely different. but i think its better this way.


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