Hello,
I am designing a logo for a foodservice company(professional kitchen equipment, refrigerators, reception desks etc.) any critique is welcomed, these are some ideas that i refined I am thinking if I should go with more cursive lines?



Maybe a food-service professional would recognize what the picture is, but to me it's too abstract--just a corner with the four little round things.
The color scheme and the typography say clean and high-tech, but they don't say food. I get kind of a biotech or pharmaceutical vibe from this, although that's partly because the name Univerzal sounds like a prescription drug. I realize they won't let you change the name of the company.

Thank you all for the feedback.
I see that Univerzal sounds to pharmaceutical(antiseptic lol) but this firm is located in macedonia and Univerzal means - Universal. So the name implies something abstract and well- universal so it can have multiple meanings and many applications. This -http://univerzal.com.mk/ is the old website of this company, and these are some websites from the region that make similar products http://frigosan.com.mk/pocetok_en.html http://frigobox.com.mk/, portionox http://portinox.es/english/home.html is an international brand in this kind of equipment, so as we can see the snowflake is the main symbol which represents the refrigerators. I wanted to go in another direction to symbolize all the different products this firm has (not just cooling equipment) so the angle should be representing the angle of some appliances (stove, refrigerator, whatever...).
I am also confused aluminium is saying it is to literal and unlejman is saying that it doesnt conect right away. I need some symbol to represent a lot of many equipments this firm makes. Anyway thank you all for the feedback I will post more ideas.
Ok. Let's make something clear here. Your image of some sort of kitchen appliance isn't anything else but that. An image. It's an image beside your logo. It's definitely not part of your logo. And it shouldn't be. Not like this. It merely serves as an inappropriate logo background.
You will either have to create a proper logo symbol (should work in full colour as well as BW) or create a clean typographic one.
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Robert Koritnik
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