Typophile

Crit this thank you card please

shielddesign

Hello,

Please crit this thank you card and let me know what you think and what can be improved. Also I am specifically wondering if the typeface goes with the illustration and if the card in general is "bold"enough.

thanks!

haven't I seen this idea before?

Where? I have seen type coming together to form a word before, but not with a dandelion. You have?

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