I read it as:

Eggroll
Indius
Tries

I clicked on the attachment BEFORE reading your post. And I couldn't figure out that the bottom word spells Industries. It made me read Indius Tries, too.

Edit: But I really like the entire concept and writing.

hm okay, I had a couple of other people say that too. I tried to fit it like
Eggroll
Indus
Tries

because it fits better than
Eggroll
Industries

I'll try pulling that i down.

Thanks

Same way here

Eggroll
Indius
Tries

The hand writing is very cool, just need a little fix with the "i" and linking Industries maybe a "-" (?)