This is the first business card I've designed for myself. I want something I can give people when networking and that I can leave around places I visit to hopefully drum up freelance business.
Thanks for your feedback.
Front - good & minimal
Back - not so good
The all lower-case Avant Garde - is that what it is? - is just too difficult to read, it's too hard to differentiate the letters (shapes are too similar) and the lines seem to blend into each other too easily. Try a different font or using mixed case or even spacing the different lines of text further away from each other.
I came up with these variations based on your suggestions.
http://i43.tinypic.com/16k8as7.jpg
I think I'll use the cropped a as my logo, too. I just redesigned my resume to include it.
The big 'a' is Justus.
I chose Avant Garde becasue it's very round and curvy and my name (in all lowercase) has lots of curves.
The point size on this version is 10pt. I don't want people to have to squint, though I don't want it to look like a big-print edition book either. A friend recommended trying all caps and moving my name.
I think it is very nice. Clean and simple. I am not a huge fan of that shade of purple, but It's a nice composition. I like to play around with Cicle, Geosans, Lane and Kabel when I am in need of a typeface that is round and curvy like Avant Garde. I am not familiar with Justus. Thanks for enlightening me. Are the lowercase g's as beautiful as the a's?
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I don't mind the all-caps so much. It's not as if it's body text or anything.
Still, suggestions for more interesting typefaces: Gotham, Neutraface, Dax or Gill Sans, all in light weight might suit your purpose.
The side with just your name on might also look good with a lighter shade of purple as the background instead of white.
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