Double post, sorry.

My thoughts:

1. Too much space between R and C in "KURC". The name needs manual kerning, too. Look carefully at the spaces between the letters. Make the "LUD Literatura 2009" bolder, perhaps in all caps. Lose that star, it adds nothing.

2. Good use of an often misused typeface. Mrs. Eaves was all the rage five or ten years ago. The background makes me slightly nauseous, but that's probably the intention. Good work.

3. "Privajanje" looks too light, and the letterspacing in "svetlobo" looks weird.

I totally agree about the kerning, thanks for pointing it out. I guess I was just too eager to share the layouts with everyone here to even give kerning a thought. Lesson learned! I've also made "Privajanje" bold.

I'm surprised though that you found the star superfluous. I thought the little sun-like dings on the orange one were maybe a bit too much, but if nothing else the author loved it. In my oppinion, they all have a rapport with the titles and contents. Believe me, however, I fully understand that no explanation or reasoning, no matter how brilliant, don't make up for bad art.

Thanks again for the input!