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Great Job! Very memorable design, while not being heavy-handed.
I did find the pyramid to be a bit subtle... For a while I only saw a truncated "E" until the other half from the Z came into focus.
I wonder if there is a way to make another suggestion in the upper left serif of the E. Maybe a slight flourish to hint at the pyramind once again.
I agree with not cutting any more letters. I guess what I am initianing would be to design a new typeface based on the predetermined 60 degree angle found in the letter Z. Take a look at
Monotype Futura Black for some "rough" Inspiration.
http://www.fonts.com/findfonts/detail.asp?pid=205103
I agree with (some of) the others: the pyramid is a hair too subtle. Could you adjust it a little?
Points to consider:
Do you consider the rightmost part of the slanted stem of the Z as being the leftmost part of the pyramid?
Do you consider the leftmost part of the serif of the Z as being the leftmost part of the pyramid?
And which of the two is most suited for making the pyramid less subtle?
Whatever you do ... you got memorability here. And likeability! (It's a mark that makes me smile due to its 'playfulness').
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Hector cutting the E is too cute. If its upscale just use the name. Tiffany's logo comes to mind. Did they have to reference anything, I don't think so and they are known worldwide. Its not the logo that will make or break the company, its the product they offer. Who knows in two years they might move from that location and the pyramid icon will be lost as an idenity
About the type. On the beginning I was thinking about something more inscriptional as well, but realized that the roman letter little to do with egypt so I tried to make it stand for elegance and refinement and as a vague reference to the napoleonic campaign on Egypt and the french XIX century by the modern style. This may be historically imprecise but so would have been using inscriptional romans.
However I used Quadraat Sans spaced bold caps on display texts.
Finally as a comparison I
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