It's a disgusting typeface,I know, but could any of you guys give me some pointers on strenghts/weaknesses, so that I can improve it??

Thanks in advance,
Jacqueline
Strengths:
- somewhat gothic charm - reminds me of Edward Gorey
- variation of treatment of bottoms of letters gives baseline energy
- approximate consistency of diagonal lines ties letters together
Weaknesses:
- unseriffed stroke of u looks odd to me.
- the ornamentation (on b, g, f) isn't consistent in style and scale.
- e and o don't fit (but you already knew that!). Try something narrower.
- the s should be thickest in the middle
- the jpg is too large! :-)
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