Any good?
type.pdf (19.5 k) |
Any good?
type.pdf (19.5 k) |
Love it! More letters please.
R
PS are we back in chunky territory here?
Hi, Tobias.
I like your typeface, but I'm not too sure about the lowercase f; I thought it was a t, at first... I notice now that you've done something similar with the descenders of g and y (is that the confusion you mention?)... Although the y looks like a y, the g *could* be confused with an a, I think...
You may want to try extending the f's ascender and the descenders of g and y... it doesn't have to be a lot -- try making a few different versions of the f, for example, with varying lengths of ascender, and let your eye decide which works best. (This is a method I learned from Briem's website, and it has been of great help to me.)
Best wishes!
That comment made me do some more, so after a break in sunny France, here it is!
tipola.pdf (182.1 k) |
Niiice.
In the lc the only things I might change are the beaks of "f" and "r": make the former's stronger, and try shearing both of them vertically.
In the UC, the "E" and "F" should be narrower, and the "L" seems too dark.
And in the numerals, the "8" isn't working.
I like the "&"!
Spacing: maybe a little tighter overall, and a hair more blank space.
hhp
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