Wasn't sure which forum this went in - it's for a poster, not not really a logo...
I'm having problems with the kerning - the thin black lines running between most letters keeps catching my eye. Any suggestions?

look at the type in situ ... on a poster ... not on a screen from less than a metre away.
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Paul Ducco
Graphic Design Melbourne
Short Film Festival
I would say it's the contrast of the black and white that's also is part of the problem... make background colour grey or another softer tint.
The 'tight' spaces will always create a visual problem, when the contrast is so high. I'd say the problem is a bit like this illustration... the eye will find it...

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