Typophile

Personal Logo

kobito7

Hi I'm working on my personal stationery and I would like to hear what you think.
This is my logo and business card. I am using a three folding format.
After I added the pattern into the card, I feel my logo is too heavy or traditional.

Thank you,

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Like the colors and use of whitespace.

What is the logo though? I was inclined to look for your initials in it but looks more abstract.

I appreciate your feedback.

T and K are in the logo. The both logo and pattern were derived from bamboo, which I have wanted to use for my logo. I love the pattern inside of the card (right side), but I feel it doesn't go with the logo because the logo has solid colors while the patterns are just lines. I am trying to edit the logo to have more organic shapes, but I still feel it is heavy.

To me it says: stained glass. The logo, not the pattern on your business card which does resemble to a vertically cut bamboo stick.
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Robert Koritnik

Thank you for your comment.

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