Hi,

Overall I think it's good, it shows your work large, which is what a portfolio should do. The text is brief which is also good.

I noticed a big typo on the third spread

"Threat the words..."

should read

"Treat the words..."

You don't want to threaten words, they can be very powerful!

good luck.

Thanks, I appreciate your opinion. Oh, thank you for the notice :) It almost slipped away to me.

I really like your portfolio/work. I think that font weight is to light that you are using in the captions either that or it is not communicating correctly in that PDF. Maybe use a thicker weight of the same font? I think it is engaging but the font would help be more "cutting edge" than just a caption.

Your work is great. I checked out that site you uploaded your work on and was about to sign up when I saw this in their user agreement.

"...you hereby grant to Issuu a worldwide, non-exclusive, transferable, assignable, fully paid-up, royalty-free, license to host, transfer, display, perform, reproduce, distribute, and otherwise exploit your Uploader Submissions, in any media forms or formats, and through any media channels, now known or hereafter devised, including without limitation, RSS feeds, embeddable functionality, and syndication arrangements in order to distribute, promote or advertise your Uploader Submissions through the Issuu Service."
(Uploader Submissions refers to artwork you upload)

Hi:

Nice portfolio!

On a technical note, the portfolio-hosting website is elegant but very slow. Waiting between clicks interrupts the viewing experience. Why not just a PDF that can be downloaded and then viewed without delays?

Teresa