Typophile

Agostina in Progress

michaelcina

I have been working on this for a long amount of time. It has taken many turns and changes and this is where it is at. I know that there are some issues but anyone want to pick it apart? Comment?

Thank you.

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Twos that look like nines have long bothered me, so I must object to the closing up of even more numerals.

I like this.

The W, R, Y, A, V, N, and M (mostly letters with strong diagonals, although the X and Z are perfect) don’t quite look like they fit with the rest. Too close to an ordinary sans-serif and too far from the Bauhaus-ish feel of the other letters. Work on them.

I think you should have more thin-line breaks, on the R, P, A, D, B, N, M, W, Y & y.

It would be helpful to see a

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