Did this as a promotional t-shirt for a photographer friend of mine. We'll be printing it two color on either a black or dark gray shirt, possibly with a very small tagline or URL on the back. It's fairly final but I'm doing some tweaking, I'd love to hear some feedback and crits either way. Thanks.
thats a killer design, i'd buy one. Thats really all I can say. Nice!
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Combines current tropes of Bantjesism, broken scripts, and floating, apparently solid type.
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Joe Clark
http://joeclark.org/
I love the design but do have a few minor suggestions:
The kerning between the "P" and "A" of "passion" is too loose. Same with the "e" and "a" of real. And I might tighten up the front end of "emotion" too.
The graphic at the lower left corner feels a bit heavy to me. It throws off the balance. Perhaps if that particular graphic was a bit transparent (lighter) the balance would seem better.
Again, these are minor. You did a great job with it.
Now that you mention it the kerning between "P" and "A" is killin' me :) Good call on the others too, appreciate the feedback. The top splatter mark was originally a little more solid which I think balanced the overall design with the bottom graphic a bit better. I'll take a look and do a bit of tweaking.
Thanks for the comments guys, though I don't know that Joe is much of a fan...ah well ;)
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