Help me with spacing please

stw7 July 2008 · 05:46

This is a logo for a roman germanic museum. Its a fictitious project for a course in my university.

The lines are take from the concrete slabs at the building. The font is done by myself. You can also take a look at its process here.

http://typophile.com/node/47055

Thank you for help

Bye: Steven

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smongey7 July 2008 · 12:48

There seems to be too much space between the C and the H on both the first and second line. The R, M and A could also be tightened. The M's and U's in museum seem to be off too. Perhaps tweak the type when it isn't reversed out of black too.

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