Hi there SUF!
Yeah it does not seem to run through correctly, as we will be selling high-end funriture, bespke products and building services, we want to look contemporary and modern (cocon) and also luxurious (the tagline) i might not have the tagline, but it just helps with the brand, lets people know what we are about, can you think of a font that would be better suited? All suggestions and ideas are welcomed!!
Thanks for your input,
Richard
I think it looks great, but I agree with SUF that the font for the strapline doesn't quite look the right font, being just a tad too 'sharp'. If you can try some other serif fonts I'm sure you'll find one that works better. I'm also wondering if the strapline could be a little closer to the main logo, but i'm sure you tried all these things before settling with the layout you currently have. I was just thinking maybe a little more equilibrium between the tracking of the strapline letters & the space between the strapline & the logo.
Glad you feel you can still come here for opinions.
JH
Well have to say glad you picked this one out of the original bunch :) Looks great though, great color choice. Not a heavy black, but not a really light gray. Adds an element of sophistication. As for getting "nit picky" I think another font for the tag is in order as everyone else has said. I also want to see it a tad darker. Only a few shades, nothing too drastic. Or same shade and a slightly thicker font. I just think it sort of gets lost especially being a little far from the main part of the logo.
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