Your trying to make the logo do all the branding. Sometimes its better to go simplier. No one is going to get cliche and kitsch from a logo. The whole environment has to create that atmostphere. I haven't a clue of what that blob is at the left of your name. Also if you are looking for retro (50s) looking stuff for reference go to Font Dinner. Great typefaces and retro stuff and some free fonts.
Hi. This is a logo Im working on for a local restaurant. It specialises in dishes that seem a bit cliche and kitsch (hence the name), but are given a modern twist. To reflect this I am trying to create a 1950's reference in the identity i'm creating, but I don't really know if the logo is working at the moment... any suggestions? what do you make of it? 