Hi All,
I recently whipped up a logo for my personal design business after I realized I never had a card to give anyone. I am going to change this when I put together my final portfolio together next year. What I am looking for is a general critique or suggestions for me to emphasize my concept. Color suggestions would be nice too. Thanks.
Hi Ryan.
What’s your concept there?
I my opinion it needs to get a little stronger, more expressive. I believe it may not work well on smaller sizes.
I like the type and the colors though.
Cheers.
Pedro Peixoto
It doesn’t read as rb to me, but rather 7-raised hyphen-0. Consistency would dictate you’d have the shadow line on the right side of the b’s ascender, too.
It doesn’t read as rb to me either. I only realized that it was an ’rb’ when I read your name. Are you just fiddling around with this on the computer, or are you starting from pencil and paper sketches?
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Nick Hladek
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