Just thought this smaller file might help

Interesting... reminds me of Mmmm... Skyscraper I Love You by Tomato.

Nathan, post your assignment so I can see it. All I see with the tiff format is gibberish. Jpeg or Gif will work for me.

Another thing i would like tto add. I was trying to use the white space as an element to emphaise the pressure the type is under.

thank you for waiting

what about incresing the scale of type i have use here
does it suggest compression, pressure?

Nathan, if I read 'interpret' rather than 'endorse' correctly, this doesn't have to have any commercial feel to it� and I like the concept. But I don't conflate the designs you have with pressure, instead I see density or volume. It might be because all lines of type appear to be without distortion and are therefore stacked atop one another.

Momentary hijack: John, Amazon is teh suck. Is the aforesaid book basically a visual interpretation of Underworld music? And the kicker: Is there Freur or Lemon Interrupt included?

Back to reality.

Kia Ora Nathan. Is this from Andr�s? If so, ask to have
a look at Jaye Hopcroft's type poster. If I remember
correctly, she also did Simply Squeezed Spirilina. Except
she made potato stamps and pressed ink onto paper
then scanned etc. Very organic and appropriate. I would
get right away from the screen and think about what
you would have to do to pulp type into a juice. I agree
with Chase, it looks under dense, not particulary squeezed.
Have fun!

kris.

Quite a beautiful form you have created. It is more the look of pulp from squeezing rather than feeling squeezed. I think the difference is that you have created a texture by using so many letterforms. You might try using far fewer words to make your point. To show squeezing, you may need to have a visual comparison to anti-squeezing. Maybe the word"Simple" is spaced normally and the word "Squeezed" uses progressively tightened letterspacing to the point of overlap. The Yin makes the Yang apparent by juxtaposition.

ChrisL