Typophile

Critique for element type recreation

higg0060

first time member. Give the the most brutal critique of the type as possilbe. Thanks.
Rich

Grrrr... hate to scroll horizontally...
Please make the preview in some other format; now im able to see only three to four letters at one time on 17" monitor, not good.

Every time i get this warning im sure that my message has been posted:

Warning: Page has Expired The page you requested was created using information you submitted in a form. This page is no longer available. As a security precaution, Internet Explorer does not automatically resubmit your information for you.

To resubmit your information and view this Web page, click the Refresh button.

And this one also:

Internal Server Error
The server encountered an internal error or misconfiguration and was unable to complete your request.
Please contact the server administrator, Webmaster and inform them of the time the error occurred, and anything you might have done that may have caused the error.

More information about this error may be available in the server error log.

Try reposting it at a smaller size and in the type critique forums (as opposed to the logo critique forum).

Standard Typophile bugginess. Code is a tad icky.
Adds some suspense to your internet experience. :-)

Is this a typeface design or ID? I'll move the thread, but that image size is way too large.

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