Hey everyone!
I am new to the site, but I have some friends that rave about it. I have been working on a personal identity mark the last few weeks. They suggested I put up a couple of my options and get some feedback. I am going for an organic, free flowing form. I want something that is not too serious looking and is delicate and beautiful. Thanks for your help.
Cambria
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If you’re looking for something delicate and free flowing, it should just be a few deliberate strokes. This ventures dangerously close to a wad of pubes. Definitely potential in these, though.
If your aim is something beautiful, I would spend some real time developing the most simple of these concepts and simplifying it.
Edit: Pardon; I didn’t see the above post prior to posting. I have nothing to add.
> a wad of pubes
Wow. That’s the funniest thing I’ve ever read/seen on this forum. LOL! Not to be mean or anything (sorry) but after reading that I had to see for myself! Funny. Sorry. But seriously...I think it’s beautiful in a doilyish way, which I also consider delicate. Nice work. How to improve it?...I concur: Simplify.
“a wad of pubes”
I LOVE that band.
lol. oh no. I will put some more time into it. Thanks for the help
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