I'm working on this Victorian looking type treatment for a clothing company. Ultimately, it will be detailed on the interior of the letter forms, and have multiple colors.
What do you think?
Thanks,
Terrance

SWEET!
Two nitpicks:
1. The bottom swash needs some bezier work to smooth it out ont he top where it passes the D (gets too fat to fast). I know the style is hand done, but it looks off.
2. The left side of the u looks a little weak. Especially at the top. Try giving it a similar weight as the right side.
With these suggestions don't kill the hand crafted look. It's working!
Also, the dots on the u are a ü? Just making sure.
Randy
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