This is a new typeface I'm working on. It's based on a song called Metaphor by Sparks.

So it's pretty wonky and some characters need to be re-done totally I think - like the x and r. But I'd love some opinions.
Thanks!
I think it might look sharp if the top of the left sides of the bowls had a tiny, tiny flare kickin' back to the left? I like 'e', it says "Yo, my cred is streety." 't' and 'h' are nice, but at the resolution I'm looking at something feels slightly incongruent between them. I think its my screen.
Update where this leads.
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