It's very clean. I only noticed a couple of things I would change.
-The arm on the r needs a little more weight.
-You may want to make the bowl smaller on the g to give more room between it and the lower arm.
-The spine on the s could be smoother.
-On the base curve of the t and top curve of the f, I would make them a bit more subtle to work more with the rest of the font.
-Maybe try something different with the z.
I think it has potential, it's very simple and neat. Bring on the uppercase.
Would like to know what you think of this stuff before I start making the uppercase.....
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