I've been developing this over the past few days and wanted to get some feedback. Thanks.
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I've been developing this over the past few days and wanted to get some feedback. Thanks.
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Just some things that look out of character. I would definitely:
Round the top left _or_ square the bottom left of the C.
Give the D a top-left stem (as on B, P, R).
Remove the upturn from the bottom right of the E.
Rethink the G completely.
Beyond that, the general squareness seems harsher on the tall capitals than on the lowercase, but as I flip back and forth between them it occurs to me that we can't really judge how well they go together without seeing them set together.
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