Fine work, especially in the black weight. You must be getting some formal training?
The spacing is too tight if you intend this to be used for text setting (which it really can do, despite it's buoyant character).
I dig your effort to keep things compact, but consider giving the descenders just a little more room. The 'g' is distractingly cramped anywhere near 10 pt.
It doesn't serve the Black weight well to show it at 10 pt. as it's really best for display use.
The angled strokes really shine on the italics.